How to use this guide
This guide is for students who know the course content but want to turn it into marks on the multiple-choice section. Read the sections on how the section works and on strategy, then try the two practice sets before opening the answers.
Every passage, question and explanation here is original Marlbridge practice, written for this course. None of it is past exam material and none of it is copied from official questions. The practice sets are short compared with the real exam so that you can look closely at how to answer.
Section I at a glance
Section I has 45 multiple-choice questions and lasts 60 minutes. It is 45% of the exam score. Each question has four options and one correct answer.
| Part | Questions | What it assesses |
|---|---|---|
| Reading questions | about 23 to 25 | Rhetorical situation, claims and evidence, reasoning and organisation, and style in nonfiction passages |
| Writing questions | about 20 to 22 | The same four areas, applied to a draft that you are asked to revise |
The section is made of five sets. Two sets of about 11 to 14 questions each are reading sets, each based on a passage. Three sets are writing sets, based on drafts, with about 7 to 9, 7 to 9 and 4 to 6 questions.
The eight skill categories share the questions roughly equally, with a little more weight on claims and evidence and on reasoning and organisation in the reading questions.
| Area | Reading | Writing |
|---|---|---|
| Rhetorical situation | Who is writing, to whom, why, and how the choices respond | Choosing content and wording for a purpose and audience |
| Claims and evidence | What the claim is and how evidence supports it | Choosing, placing and explaining evidence |
| Reasoning and organisation | How the argument is ordered and how its parts connect | Introductions, transitions, ordering and conclusions |
| Style | What diction, syntax and comparisons do | Concision, modifiers, punctuation, sentence variety |
Pacing
Sixty minutes for 45 questions gives about 80 seconds a question. Reading questions take longer because you must read a passage first, so a sensible plan is:
| Stage | Suggested time |
|---|---|
| Reading set 1 (passage plus 11 to 14 questions) | about 15 to 17 minutes |
| Reading set 2 | about 15 to 17 minutes |
| Writing sets 3, 4 and 5 (20 to 22 questions) | about 22 to 25 minutes |
The writing questions are usually quicker because the drafts are short. If you are good at them, you can bank time for the reading sets.
Practical pacing points:
- Check the clock at the end of each set, not after every question.
- Mark and move. If a question has taken you two minutes, choose your best option, mark it and go on. Come back only if time remains.
- Answer every question. There is no penalty for a wrong answer.
- Do not change answers without a reason. Change an answer only when you find a specific piece of evidence that you missed, not because of a feeling.
Strategy for reading questions
Read the passage for its shape
Spend about two minutes on the first read. Use these quick notes in the margin:
- Situation. The introduction tells you the writer, the date and often the occasion. What problem prompted this text?
- Claim. What is the writer arguing, in one sentence?
- Movement. What does each paragraph do? Label them with a short verb: “states problem”, “concedes”, “gives example”, “turns”, “proposes”.
- Shifts. Mark any change in tone, direction or evidence type, because questions often ask about these.
Return to the text for every question
Most reading questions name a line or a paragraph. Reread the cited lines and a sentence on either side before you look at the options. The answer must be supported by the text, not by what you already know about the topic or what seems true in general.
Predict, then match
For “primarily to” and “function” questions, say your own answer in a few words before reading the options. Then pick the option closest to your prediction. This protects you from persuasive wrong options.
Types of reading question
| Type | What it asks | How to approach |
|---|---|---|
| Exigence or purpose | Why was this written; what does the writer want | Use the introduction and the opening and closing paragraphs |
| Function of a sentence or paragraph | What does this part do for the whole | Say what the sentence does (contrasts, concedes, illustrates), not what it says |
| Claim | What is the writer’s position on a particular point | Find the sentence that states it; watch for qualifiers |
| Evidence | What kind of evidence is used and what it does | Name the kind (anecdote, data, authority, analogy) and the effect |
| Line of reasoning | How the argument is built | Trace how each paragraph depends on the last |
| Tone and attitude | How the writer feels and wants the reader to feel | Look at diction and syntax, and watch for shifts |
| Style | What a choice of word, structure or comparison achieves | Always link the choice to the effect on this audience |
| Word in context | What a word means here | Substitute each option into the sentence |
What the wrong options usually look like
Understanding why options are wrong is the fastest way to remove them.
| Kind of wrong option | Description | Example sign |
|---|---|---|
| Too extreme | Uses “always”, “never”, “completely” when the text hedges | The writer writes “often”, the option says “always” |
| Out of scope | Might be true, but the passage does not say it | Requires outside knowledge |
| Opposite | Reverses the writer’s position or the function | “Concedes” when the sentence rebuts |
| True but not the answer | Accurate statement about the text that does not answer this question | Describes content, not function |
| Wrong part | Describes a different paragraph or line | Mentions an idea not in the cited lines |
| Half right | The first half is correct and the second half is not supported | Check every clause of the option |
Practice set 1: reading
The passage below is an original Marlbridge text written for practice.
(1) Last spring the council voted to replace the town’s paper library cards with a phone app. (2) Officials called the change “modernisation”. (3) Yet the app requires a smartphone, a data plan and an email address, and the people who most depend on the library, such as pensioners, job seekers and children without devices, are the least likely to have all three. (4) A card, by contrast, needed only a name and a signature. (5) The council’s own survey found that one in five borrowers had no smartphone. (6) Modernisation that leaves one borrower in five at the door is not progress; it is a convenience for those who already had every other convenience.
1. In sentence 2, the writer puts “modernisation” in quotation marks primarily to
- (A) show that the word is a technical term from library management
- (B) quote the council’s word while signalling doubt that the change deserves it
- (C) praise the council for adopting a modern approach
- (D) indicate that the word comes from the survey mentioned later
2. Sentence 4 (“A card, by contrast, needed only a name and a signature”) primarily serves to
- (A) concede that paper cards were out of date
- (B) introduce a new topic unrelated to the app
- (C) underline the barrier the app creates by contrasting what each system required
- (D) provide a statistic about library use
3. The reference to “The council’s own survey” in sentence 5 most strengthens the argument by
- (A) offering evidence from a source the council is unlikely to dismiss
- (B) showing that borrowers prefer paper cards
- (C) giving a personal experience of one borrower
- (D) admitting that the survey was poorly designed
4. Which statement best describes the movement of the final sentence?
- (A) It repeats the claim of the opening sentence in different words.
- (B) It shifts from describing the app to judging its fairness, using a contrast between “progress” and “convenience”.
- (C) It introduces a counterargument that the writer then accepts.
- (D) It changes the subject to the problem of mobile data prices.
Answers and explanations (set 1)
1. (B). Quotation marks around a word that someone else has used often signal distance. The writer reports the council’s label and then spends the rest of the passage showing why it is doubtful. (A) is wrong because nothing in the text treats the word as technical. (C) reverses the writer’s attitude. (D) is out of scope: the survey appears later and is not the source of the word.
2. (C). The sentence sets what the card needed (a name and a signature) against what the app needs (a smartphone, data and email in sentence 3), so the reader sees the extra burden. (A) is the opposite: the sentence does not concede that cards were out of date. (B) fails because the topic is still the same. (D) is wrong because the sentence contains no statistic.
3. (A). The survey belongs to the council, so a council that wants to dismiss the finding cannot easily do so. (B) goes beyond the text because the survey reports that borrowers lacked smartphones, not that they prefer paper. (C) is wrong because a survey is not one borrower’s experience. (D) has no support in the passage.
4. (B). The sentence moves from the app to a value judgement, and the “not progress; it is a convenience” structure presents two terms in contrast. (A) is half right because the sentence returns to the theme, but it adds a new judgement rather than repeating. (C) is wrong because there is no counterargument. (D) is out of scope.
Strategy for writing questions
The writing questions give you a draft, with each sentence numbered, and ask how it could be improved. They are not a test of how a sentence sounds. They ask what a change does for the writer’s purpose.
Read the whole draft first
Before the first question, read the draft quickly and decide what the writer is trying to do. Then each question has a purpose to measure the options against.
Types of writing question
| Type | Typical wording | What to check |
|---|---|---|
| Introduction | “Which sentence, if placed before sentence 1, would best…” | Does it engage the reader and lead to the topic without drifting? |
| Transition | “Which choice best accomplishes this goal?” for an added word or phrase | What is the logical relation: contrast, addition, cause, example? |
| Thesis or position | “Which version best establishes the writer’s position?” | Is it specific, arguable and connected to the passage? |
| Evidence | “Which sentence, if added, would best support the claim?” | Is it relevant and specific, and does it support this claim? |
| Concision | “Which version of the underlined text is most concise while keeping the meaning?” | Remove repetition, but do not lose meaning |
| Modifiers | “Which revision corrects the error?” | Does the modifier sit next to the word it describes? |
| Punctuation and grammar | “Which version of the underlined text is correct?” | Sentence boundaries, agreement, parallelism, commas, colons and dashes |
| Combining sentences | “Which choice best combines sentences 3 and 4?” | Does it show the right relation, with correct punctuation? |
| Organisation | “Where should sentence 6 be placed?” | What does the sentence refer back to; what does it set up? |
| Conclusion | “Which version best concludes the paragraph?” | Does it complete the argument and not just repeat or add a new topic? |
A method that works
- Name the goal in the question stem in your own words.
- Check the logic first. If the question is about a transition, decide the relationship before looking at the options.
- Test each option by substituting it into the draft and reading the sentence before and after.
- Look at the “as it is now” option last. If the existing text already meets the goal, (A) is correct. If it does not, you must be able to say what is wrong with it.
- Check the rules when the options differ in punctuation. A short mental list helps: sentence boundaries (comma splice, fragment), colon after a full clause, matching items in a list, modifier next to what it describes.
Common traps in writing questions
- The longer or fancier option. The best answer is often plain and exact.
- The option that adds information that is true but off-topic. It does not support the claim.
- A transition that sounds formal but states the wrong relation. “Furthermore” when the second sentence contrasts.
- Repetition disguised as emphasis. Concision questions often reward the shortest option that keeps all the meaning.
- A modifier in the wrong place. “Walking to school, the rain began” suggests the rain was walking.
Practice set 2: writing
The draft below is an original Marlbridge text written for practice.
(1) Many schools now start the day at nine o’clock instead of eight. (2) Sleep researchers have found that teenagers’ body clocks run later, so an early start leaves many of them tired. (3) Some parents worry about the change. (4) Their working hours do not move, and a later start can leave a gap before work. (5) Schools could open early for supervised study. (6) Schools should therefore adopt later start times.
5. The writer wants to add a transition at the beginning of sentence 3, adjusting the capitalisation as needed, to introduce a counterargument. Which choice best accomplishes this goal?
- (A) Likewise,
- (B) For instance,
- (C) Nevertheless,
- (D) As a result,
6. Which version of sentence 5 (reproduced below) best answers the parents’ concern?
Schools could open early for supervised study.
- (A) (as it is now)
- (B) Schools could open early for supervised study, so the gap would disappear for any family that needs it.
- (C) Gaps before work are not important.
- (D) Many schools are already open early for other reasons.
7. Which version of sentence 6 best states the writer’s full position?
- (A) (as it is now)
- (B) Schools should therefore adopt later start times, provided they also offer supervised study before the first lesson.
- (C) Therefore, it is a good idea.
- (D) In conclusion, later start times are something about which many people have views.
8. Which sentence, if placed before sentence 1, would best introduce the topic and engage the reader?
- (A) Schools have existed for centuries.
- (B) At seven fifteen on a winter morning, a fifteen-year-old’s body is still behaving as if it were the middle of the night.
- (C) School start times are a topic.
- (D) This essay will discuss school start times.
Answers and explanations (set 2)
5. (C). Sentence 3 introduces a worry that cuts against the case made in sentence 2, so the relation is contrast. “Nevertheless” signals that. (A) signals similarity and (B) signals an example, but sentence 3 is neither. (D) signals result, which would suggest that the parents’ worry follows from the research.
6. (B). The sentence answers the concern directly by explaining how the proposal removes the gap that sentence 4 describes. (A) leaves the link between the suggestion and the concern implicit. (C) dismisses the concern without evidence. (D) is true-sounding but does not respond to the working-hours problem.
7. (B). It states the position and the condition on which it depends, which is the position the draft has built (benefits from sentence 2, the concern from sentences 3 and 4, and the remedy in sentence 5). (A) states only part of the position. (C) is vague and does not say what the “it” is. (D) abandons the claim.
8. (B). The concrete image engages the reader and leads straight into the topic, since the draft goes on to discuss teenagers’ body clocks. (A) is too general to interest or lead anywhere. (C) is empty. (D) announces the topic rather than engaging the reader, and it is not usual in an argument to refer to the essay itself.
Reading and writing questions together
The same four big ideas appear on both sides of the section. The skills transfer:
| Reading skill | Matching writing skill |
|---|---|
| Identifying the function of a sentence | Deciding where to place or whether to add a sentence |
| Judging whether evidence supports a claim | Choosing which added sentence supports a claim |
| Seeing how a transition links ideas | Choosing the transition that states the right relation |
| Recognising an effect of diction or syntax | Choosing the version that is concise, exact and fits the tone |
When you revise your own essays you are doing the work of the writing questions, and when you analyse a passage you are doing the work of the reading questions. Use one to train the other.
A suggested routine for practice
- Do one set under time. Reading sets, 15 minutes. Writing sets, 8 to 10 minutes.
- Mark your confidence next to each answer: sure, unsure, guess.
- Review every answer, including the correct ones. For each, write one sentence: why the right option is right and why the best wrong option is wrong.
- Keep an error log with three columns: question type, what you chose, what the text supported. After three sets you will see patterns, such as always choosing the “too extreme” option on tone questions.
- Fix the pattern with a targeted topic guide before doing more sets.
Common mistakes
- Answering from memory of the passage. Always return to the lines.
- Choosing the option you agree with. The question asks what the text does, not what you believe.
- Ignoring the qualifier in an option. “Completely”, “only” and “never” are often the reason an option is wrong.
- Treating “as it is now” as a trap. It is right when the original already works.
- Spending four minutes on one question. Mark, move on and return.
- Confusing content with function. What a sentence says and what it does for the argument are different, and “primarily to” questions ask the second.
Where this leads
Combine this guide with the essay guide, because both train the same habit: ask what a choice does for a particular audience in a particular situation. When you can answer that question quickly for a sentence in a passage and for a sentence in your own draft, both sections of the exam become more manageable.
Quick questions
Is there a penalty for wrong answers?
No. A wrong answer scores the same as a blank, so answer every question. If you must guess, remove the options you can eliminate first.
Should I read the passage or the questions first?
Read the passage first, quickly and with a pen, noting the writer's purpose and the shape of the argument. Then answer in order, returning to the cited lines each time. Reading questions first can bias what you notice.
Do the writing questions test grammar rules from a list?
Some do, such as punctuation, modifiers and sentence boundaries. But many ask which revision best serves the writer's purpose. Know the rules, then decide which choice fits the rhetorical situation.
What if two options both seem right?
Compare them against the exact wording of the question. One usually answers a slightly different question, or goes beyond what the passage supports. The better answer is the one the text most directly supports.