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AP® English Language and Composition · Unit 1 · Topic 1.4

Claims That Need a Defence: Revision Notes (English Language 1.4)

One-page recap of claims that require a defence, and how they differ from facts, topics and preferences, with a quick self-check and the mistakes to avoid.

Recap

A claim is a position the writer asks the audience to accept, and it must be one that requires a defence: a reasonable person could disagree, so the writer must give evidence or reasoning. A fact, a topic and a preference are not claims. A strong claim is arguable, specific, supportable and significant. Claims may be explicit or implicit, and a long text has a main claim supported by sub-claims.

Key relationships

Statement type Test Example
Fact Can be checked, not in dispute “The library opens 40 hours a week.”
Topic Names a subject, asserts nothing “Library hours”
Preference Personal taste, cannot be disproved “I like quiet places.”
Claim A reasonable person could dispute it “The council should restore the library’s hours.”

Kinds of claim

  • Fact or existence: something is, was or will be so, but is disputed.
  • Definition: what something counts as.
  • Cause: one thing produces another.
  • Value: something is good, bad, right or wrong.
  • Policy: something should be done.

Each kind tells you what must be defended: a causal claim needs a causal link, a policy claim needs a problem and a workable remedy.

Upgrading a weak claim

  1. Ask “Could a reasonable person disagree?” If no, the sentence is a fact or a topic.
  2. Take a side: add a verb of judgement or recommendation (should, harms, improves).
  3. Narrow it: name the group, place or situation.
  4. Check support: could you defend it with evidence or reasoning?

Weak: “Social media is a big part of life.” Stronger: “Social media has made teenagers better informed about world events but worse at sustaining attention on any one of them.”

Worked mini-examples

  • Lincoln, 1858: “I believe this government cannot endure, permanently half slave and half free.” A claim about the future, disputed in its day, so it needs a defence.
  • Thoreau, 1849: “I heartily accept the motto, ‘That government is best which governs least’…” A claim of value and policy: those who think government should do more would dispute it.

Reading for claims on the exam

  • Ask of each sentence: would a reader reply “Why?” or “I’m not sure”? If so, it is a claim.
  • State the main claim in one sentence, then list the sub-claims by paragraph.
  • If no sentence states the main claim, summarise what the evidence adds up to.
  • Do not quote a fact as if it were the claim.

Mistakes to avoid

  • Treating a fact, topic or preference as a claim.
  • Writing a claim so broad that nobody could dispute it.
  • Assuming a claim must be false or controversial worldwide.
  • Expecting the main claim always to appear in the first paragraph.
  • Writing a claim that cannot be supported by evidence (a pure taste).

Quick self-check

  1. Is “The school day ends at 3.30 p.m.” a claim? No, it is a fact.
  2. What question tests whether a sentence is a claim? Could a reasonable person disagree, so that I would need to defend it?
  3. Why is “Homework” not a claim? It is a topic: it asserts nothing.
  4. Improve “Technology changes learning.” For example: “Tablets in classrooms widen pupils’ access to information but weaken their ability to read at length.”
  5. Name two kinds of claim. For example, policy and cause (also fact, definition, value).

For the full explanation and worked examples, return to the study guide.

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